Netbook refection

It really feels good to have a netbook  to work with. This  has really made a change in my learning. Last year, without these interesting netbooks, I worked really really slow like a sloth in the tree. I worked slow in everything like writing, reading, maths and also topic. But  I was mostly  slow in doing my writing. I never finished my writing in time and my teacher always glares at because I never finished in time for him to mark it. But now, with my netbook, I finish everything on time.

With my netbook it helps me comment on blog,s it help me to blog  and it also help me learn to create  pictures and music.

My lovely netbook also helps me research online. It also help me to make fantastic movies. We didn't only make movie but we also made a cool as cartoon.

Without my netbook I don't know what my learning would be like. I would probably still be slow as a sloth in the tree.

This is how much my netbook really means to me. My netbook is the best thing every ever.

AN AMAZING DAY AT THE ZOO

LONG, long ago in a house far away there was a family of Tortoise. There were four turtle. There was the mum and dad and the son and daughter. The son’s name is Franklin and the daughter’s name is Alliot. Franklin had a lot of friends, their name’s were Bear, Fox, Rabbit and Beaver. I  guess they were his best friends. They were also very smart they could count in twos and tie their shoes.

One lovely sunny Saturday morning their teacher Mr Owl called each one of their parents to let them know that they will be going to the Zoo. Franklin was very happy. When he finished getting ready he went to school. Franklin doesn't like being late for anything exciting like going on school trips. When he got to school all his friends were already there. They were all very excited to see all the animals Franklin was also very excited until he heard there will be a Hippopotamus. He was very terrified of the Hippopotamus when he tried to face his fears, he couldn't.  He was too short so he held on to the pole and crouched up to see the Hippopotamus. When he saw the Hippopotamus he was so scared he started panicking. His arm was shaking all the time but he said to himself, I need to get over my fears.
But his hand was shaking too much his hand couldn’t take it much longer. Then he was about to let go so he could get to the ground but when he let go he fell into the water. He started panicking he started calling his mum and dad and was crying at the same time. He saw a zookeeper, he started calling out to the zookeeper. When the zookeeper saw him she started rushing to save him because the Hippopotamus was coming towards him, really fast. When the zookeeper got him out, they had to call his parents. When his parents got there his mum and started crying and he told his mum that he would never ever do that again.
So from that day on he learnt his lesson.

I want to go to London!!!!!!!

Dear Mr Hendricks

Out of all the children in the Room 9 class that should  be chosen to go to the the Olympics 2012 ,I think that I should be the one to go to the Olympics. And I got five  reason why I should go..

Firstly,  I am a good listener and you won't have to growl at me.

Next I can use all the facts that I get from the olympics and write a book for the library.

I have never been to the Olympics before in my life, and it would be lovely to go to London.

If I get to go I can come back and share all my amazing facts with the whole of Glen Innes School and the community.

Finally it will be the best trip that I  will ever have.

So please pick me Mr Hendricks.  I will be the best one from our school to go.